Criterion A: 5, I think that i referenced the text not just in the passage but as a whole pretty well.
Criterion B: 4, I think I talked about literary devices but didn't focus enough on the effects of them
Criterion C: 2, I think that I talked about important aspects but as a whole when I started talking and got nervous became unorganized.
Criterion D: 3, I think that I used good vocabulary to discuss the passage and the novel but I think I could've used more advanced language to strengthen the commentary.
I emailed my recording to Mrs. Genesky, I couldn't find a way to attach to my blog post.
Michael:
ReplyDelete- Good context at beginning
- Good thesis/end result- just need to know HOW that is established and with what effect?
- Reference the text
- Too much outside analysis and discussion- need to root everything in passage- what's the purpose of the passage? How do you know, based on what the author or narrator does (language and literary devices)?